She's tall, slim and fair
and intoxicating
The seductive enchantress.
And yet, once you've tasted her
She's harsh and bitter
Evil personified.
Each time he puts his lips to hers
my blood boils and freezes over
And her fragrance lingers
Long after they've parted
Tormenting me with its whiffs....
He loves me dearly
and he knows I hate her
and yet, he adores her so...
She's got him under her spell, the scorceress
And all I can do is eulogise her.
Inspired by and dedicated to some very important people in my life. I hope you quit smoking soon.
15 comments:
awwww... marlboro sends its hatemail!!... and i send my love!!
"Each time he puts his lips to hers"
technically... its not a ciggy's "lips" that you put your lips to you know... its the ciggy's "butt"...
just a correction... ;)
@ h: poetic licence? :)
eulogise, are you sure??
too qute too be writing this
where be promised post?
Thanks prachee!
liked your poem! Keep writing
Nice. Remove typo. And eulogise? Eh?
hey gud one...
not bad!
but u eulogise her like this and u r gonna tempt people to smoke - as u have me right now!:)
Quite a surprise. I didn't think you'd be found on a blog :)
./w
Awesome...i rarely understand poems...but this is awesome!!
enjoyed reading:)
gosh thi is a stroong! one!!
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